Kashmir Conflict


     Did you know that there was a fight between Pakistan and India for Kashmir? There was a big conflict between Pakistan and India. They both wanted Kashmir and they wanted their land. So they fought and fought and wouldn't stop fighting. They were fighting on and off for seven decades. 


Pakistan and India are fighting over a country named Kashmir. They fought over Kashmir because they both wanted Kashmir’s land. They also fought over Kashmir because India and Pakistan “claimed” that it was their land but they were lying because Kashmir didn’t give any land to Pakistan or India. Kashmir didn’t want to give any of their land away to Pakistan or India. They kept fighting and fighting for seven decades. 


Do you think Kashmir should give Pakistan and India there land or do you think that Kashmir should be their own country? In my opinion I think Kashmir should be their own country because that is how Kashmir feels. Kashmir doesn’t want anything to do with fights, they just want to be independent. According to a survey, 91% of the people in Kashmir want to be an independent country. Kashmir is also getting violated too because Pakistan and and India are fighting over there land. 


In conclusion, that is why I think Kashmir should be their own country. Kashmir should be their own country because that is what they wanted and it was their land so it was their decision. I also stated many reasons why Kashmir should be their own independent country. That was my opinion on the Kashmir conflict. 



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Comments

  1. I really like this blog, the way you started your topic sentence was really good.

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  2. Great job! I love your topic paragraph.

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  3. Nice job, but you have a few typos. Also, in the first paragraph you say the same thing twice "there is a fight/conflict between Pakistan and India"

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